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Transformers-Mosaic β Birth of the Primitives
Published: 2010-02-11 07:12:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 5258; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 61
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Story and Letters by;Waseem "Ninjha" Bashar [link]
Art and Colours by:
Roy "Purpletealman" S [link]
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This one was just plain weird, I can't say I like this one, but I can't say that I hate it either.
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Sorry I can't say I like this one. I say that because the whole time it felt like my thirteen year lod nephew was telling me the story, and I was questioning why you used these characters. Please try again story wise and please don't throw random charaters together. At least make up your own.
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It's a short comic. WhatΒ did you expect?Β
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And I should clarify what I mean by random characters, I'm talking about the ones in vamps group. I have no idea who the three decpticons are.
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The random characters behind Vamp are those that have appeared in the Beast Wars franchise. The three decepticons are the Firecons Sparkstalker, Flamefeather and Cinderdsaur.
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Random. Very random.We also have no reason, how or why, the various characters are working together or even ALIVE at the same time. Inferno alive with Razorclaw? Do what now?
The art is not bad, but the panels are too small and its too busy. A riot of color and "motion" that makes the panels seem crowded.
The writing is bland. "Oh look a thingy!"
"Oh no we are attacked!"
The last panel actually gives the reader a snippet of something to work with, but then ends abruptly.
Kinda feels like we came in during the middle of the movie. We are given no backstory or preface of how or why this stuff is.(see previous comment about different characters from different times with different agendas working together.)
Ultimately, i judge it an ambitious idea with poor execution.
A sequel or prequel strip may help.
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It's a short comic. WhatΒ did you expect? Β
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Holy Inhumanoids! I'm not much for crossovers- at all- but I do like the vehicle forms for Sparkstalker, Flamefeather and Cinderdsaur.
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We've seen this idea hashed out before in Mosaics, so aside from being an origin for the Firecons it doesn't really show us anything we haven't see before. It's not a bad piece, but it just feels rather... bland. Sorry.
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Said it better than I could. Also the art feels rather...cluttered? Too much stuff in one place.
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i kind of agree. but the animal transformers orginating from gobots vamp? where is that from?
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Eh I think they were just trying to fill the ranks.
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Hey, it's Vamp from the Gobots!
BW Inferno repainted in green?
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That's Waspinator actually.
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i like this very much! the art is very detailed and quite amazing. the origin of the firecons. are those pretenders attacking? i like how the firecons have some personilty reminds me of zoolander. so this is the queen the inferno always talks about?
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Nice, fun little Mosaic here!
Love the colour scheme - it takes careful skill to manage something like that and not let it get out of hand.
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Hmm no, to much stuff thrown together with no reason for it at all really.
Looks like some fast fanfic just throwing in some random characters and reusing an existing plotline really.
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yes. i thought mosaics were fanmade. is one of the rules of mosiac is follow the contuinity of regular transformers stories?
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As far as I know, the only rule is not using OCs. There's plenty of Mosaics that don't squarely fit into any existing canon plotline.
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Hey, the firecons! Kick-a$$!
Is that a crossover? The bad guys remind me of the Inhumanoids.
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"FOR THE ROYALTY!" XD
(that's right, I see Inferno there!)
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Or should I say everybody likes it so far!
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tell me you have a part 2. it just ends suddenly
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Well as of right now, no. I'm sure Waseem has an idea or two. We just haven't got to it yet!
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These guys have the same mission as the maximals in Beast Machines
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Only with more violent measures.
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