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Published: 2016-11-26 01:53:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 52320; Favourites: 450; Downloads: 96
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Woo! So here we have the first page of this comic. Once in a while a fanfic stands out so much that it deserves more recognition... So here's my contribution!

The original story can be found here: archiveofourown.org/works/5056…
You can read ahead, or read my comic with that original suspense which I so dearly loved!

Also if you want to make a comic dub of this, please go ahead! I totally encourage it. Just give credit to me and unrestedjade.

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Comments: 51

pinkiepieschoolpony4 [2019-01-04 18:06:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh gee its Papyrus! that's who Flowey was looking menacing at in the intro of the comic oh no Papy boy please be careful...but I love the art style of this Undertale comic its fresh clean & pretty unique the detail is lovely very outstanding hmm this is quite the interesting start it only has me thinking on what Flowey might be up to...I'm a little concerned for Papyrus I am slightly worried to be honest heh.

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aug325 [2018-12-16 04:40:39 +0000 UTC]

BEHOLD! The last happy moment papyrus ever has?

(why did I read that fic in one sitting I am not well. lol) 

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the1stMangler [2018-09-24 14:44:31 +0000 UTC]

hey paps you forgot to add OF DEATH to floweys ego

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HopesDreamss [2018-08-12 17:59:10 +0000 UTC]

fedex 

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OrlandoTheSmurf [2018-07-08 20:39:32 +0000 UTC]

What an amazing color scheme, hope to see it more

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MeloBeat [2017-11-27 04:27:52 +0000 UTC]

My favourite magical talking flower!

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Kahzzy In reply to MeloBeat [2017-11-27 14:35:07 +0000 UTC]

Hi I'm flowey

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PrincessStarfirefly [2017-09-26 03:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Don't trust him papyrus don't!" ok do cuz is more interesting but still!

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spiritlit [2017-09-14 16:19:58 +0000 UTC]

nononono don't get attached, don't get attACHED !!

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Sweathands [2017-09-10 21:56:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god it's gorgeous. <3

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C-Puff [2017-07-01 00:34:06 +0000 UTC]

Woah! That first panel is really nice! I'm guessing it was put together as a custom? I sure don't remember that area anywhere in the game! (although I STILL haven't finished pacifist so???) I also like the transition from game graphics to drawn images to ease us into the setting and story! It's a really neat effect and I like that it helps cement these characters for us as their game counterparts.

I also really like the dimension you give to Flowey's face. Something I never realised would be... a good idea X'D The second last panel is my favourite for this. ugh. Flowey looks so lovable there. what a little shit XD Flowey, why are you like this?

I also really like the phosphorescent effect here to mimic stars. It's shiny and sparkly, but still distinctly NOT real stars. It's a cool effect. And also nice to put the very faint glow around Flowey in that panel to distinguish him from the black roof.

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fluffySlipper In reply to C-Puff [2017-08-07 05:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the first panel was custom. Oh pixel art, it can be a lot of work sometimes. I'm glad you liked the transition from pixel to reality! But tbh I can't stop cringing at my first page, that transition could have been so much more glorious... Also I can't stop being in awe at how active you are in the Undertale fandom when you haven't even finished pacifist--it's like the 8th wonder of the world. Kudos to you!

But oh I love your attention to detail. You notice all the little things I did trying to make this page shine. That level of observation is something to be admired <3




 

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C-Puff In reply to fluffySlipper [2017-09-10 17:47:46 +0000 UTC]

asdjaslkj sorry this took so long to get back to D'X

Aw, well I really like the transition very much ;w; I think it works very well! Honestly? I've had to MAKE myself be more active in the fandom. and I still feel like I'm rather isolated. (Mostly my own fault tho for trying to avoid spoilers even to this day?) So I try my best. Otherwise I was feeling very lonely and like my art didn't matter with bigger fanworks out there

And I'm really happy! ;w; I want to praise what I really like! So I enjoy spending a little extra time on a page and really enjoying it.

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AngelDraws27 [2017-06-21 00:05:12 +0000 UTC]

would you mind if i do a comic dub?

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fluffySlipper In reply to AngelDraws27 [2017-07-01 00:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Go ahead!

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AngelDraws27 In reply to fluffySlipper [2017-07-01 01:09:42 +0000 UTC]

i sorta already have.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=XxCeXI…

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Zytrus [2017-05-21 20:45:17 +0000 UTC]

He's the ONLY magical talking flower~ xDD

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pocketsans595 In reply to Zytrus [2017-06-12 17:11:01 +0000 UTC]

lol

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SansFangirl4life [2017-05-13 16:55:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy! Flowey is SO up to stuff!

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LightningKing123 [2017-05-10 11:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Compare this Paps to the latest papyrus, 

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SpaceKeys [2017-01-30 00:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Etsumi-Chan574  

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Etsumi-San In reply to SpaceKeys [2017-01-30 18:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Why did you send me something so depressing ;;
Freaking flowey better stay the dickens away from my Papy child or imma fight him

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fluffySlipper In reply to SpaceKeys [2017-01-30 04:38:13 +0000 UTC]

wut?

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SpaceKeys In reply to fluffySlipper [2017-01-30 04:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, just tagging a friend so she can see this amazing comic you did!

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fluffySlipper In reply to SpaceKeys [2017-01-30 21:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh that's how it works. Cool!

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LilyWhite-KittyWake [2017-01-28 03:51:09 +0000 UTC]

SOME ONE MADE A COMIC OF THIS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH

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fluffySlipper In reply to LilyWhite-KittyWake [2017-01-28 14:04:18 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW RIGHT!!! uh I hope you like it

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EEeEECreepyPasta [2016-12-15 22:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaah this story!

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pastel-fart [2016-12-12 23:36:44 +0000 UTC]

They look so pretty!!! ;m;

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0guilty0 [2016-12-03 05:45:23 +0000 UTC]

the whole story starts out of boredom lol

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UltimateEmpress [2016-12-01 09:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Is this before Flowey gets bored?

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fluffySlipper In reply to UltimateEmpress [2016-12-01 18:52:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm pretty sure he's already bored with everything at this point, and he's just looking for anything new to play with.

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BlazingCoral [2016-11-28 23:50:12 +0000 UTC]

HOLY SMOKES, you're making a comic of this?! Welp, I'm definitely following!

Man, the art is gorgeous and so detailed...! I also like the detail of the sprites at the top there.

I caught myself "aw"ing at this scene, then kinda mentally slapped myself, because I've read this fic and I know exactly where this is going. AAAAAAAA. Can't wait to see more!

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fluffySlipper In reply to BlazingCoral [2016-11-29 01:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Heh, turning "aw" into "AAAAAAA" is what I'm going for  Also I'm glad you like the pixel art. Thanks for the follow!

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Aevlynran [2016-11-28 19:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! What a lovely style you have!

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fluffySlipper In reply to Aevlynran [2016-11-28 19:51:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The style might actually change as we go on, but for now it's matching the tone pretty well

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Blackcat-101 [2016-11-26 16:29:45 +0000 UTC]

I've read the story and I was hoping that somebody would actually do a comic off of that story. Nice job you did. Can't wait for more. 

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perfectshadow06 [2016-11-26 14:44:58 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWWWW! This is cute! and I lvoe your Art style!

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Sprinkles257 [2016-11-26 12:29:39 +0000 UTC]

I read this a few months ago....Hm, I can't wait to see the next page!

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shiinyao [2016-11-26 10:37:55 +0000 UTC]

I love it. Can't wait for another I've read fanfic already but goin' on with the comic should be much fun again
I've made a fanart for this fic for chapter 23  (spoilers alert!) :3 I can't wait to see how you saw this scene ^__^ 

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xskiball [2016-11-26 07:25:50 +0000 UTC]

just a heads up

theres a typo in the last panel

its "youre my favorite magical talking flower"

you forgot the word "favorite"

sorry

i notice to many things

probably because ive read this fanfiction atleast 3 times now

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fluffySlipper In reply to xskiball [2016-11-26 15:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I can't believe I didn't catch that. Well I fixed it. Thank you very much

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xskiball In reply to fluffySlipper [2016-11-26 20:41:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome > u<

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Vee-TDC [2016-11-26 04:24:01 +0000 UTC]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! OMG!!!!!! NO WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!

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fluffySlipper In reply to Vee-TDC [2016-11-26 04:50:45 +0000 UTC]

YEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I FEEL THE SAME WAY!!!!!!

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Vee-TDC In reply to fluffySlipper [2016-11-26 05:07:20 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Cornelischmidt1527 [2016-11-26 04:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Aw...this is so sweet ^w^

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Sprinkles257 In reply to Cornelischmidt1527 [2016-11-26 12:32:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it is sweet....For now. ;D

Oh boy, you're in for something. I really suggest you read the fic. Also, sorry for being so abrupt, but don't you think this person's art is awesome? I love their art sO far.

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Cornelischmidt1527 In reply to Sprinkles257 [2016-11-26 14:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Me too! That was why I am watchung her

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Sprinkles257 In reply to Cornelischmidt1527 [2016-11-26 14:18:20 +0000 UTC]

I just did too. XP

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