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Published: 2016-12-17 21:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 37288; Favourites: 306; Downloads: 63
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Pap didn't know what he was getting into when this story began. Geez, Flowey is fun to draw, especially when he goes all horrific plant monster thing on Pap.
I guess there's one more page to this chapter. I'm slowly figuring out pacing... And then after that, I might make some cover art. ONWARD!!!
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The original story by UnrestedJade can be found here: archiveofourown.org/works/5056…
Btw if you want to make a comic dub of this, please go ahead! I totally encourage it. Just give credit to me and unrestedjade.
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Oh my! I like this beginning. I bet Papyrus -is- dreaming of running away!
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Whoa um...ok then this just took a turn in the wrong direction oh no...come on Flowey please don't do this to Papyrus he's way to innocent & nice for this well the comic is taking a dark turn but dam the art with Flowey growing more massive & going crazy & evil like he does is quite cool the design the visual detail is outstandingly awesome dam that's one big flower stem it up haha 
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oh boy, you poor innocent child, you witnessed one of the saddest papyrus fics of all time
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Yeah it does seem like one of the saddest Papyrus fics of all time but it looks like a excellent story to tell the truth
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"don't trust the flowers"
that's the the number one rule in undertale, and papyrus is about to pay for ignoring it.
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It's not his fault. No one gave him the rulebook.
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Aah Flowey, why you gotta be this way? X'D
I like the "broken" panels in the middle there. Again, a technique I really like in comics and yet somehow never have the mind to do it myself because I am not very experimental with my panels 8'D to my detriment lol. I really like it! It's effective to show a progression! I also really really love the silhouette vs the colourd details in the last panel. It gives a great sense of dimension and gives a real "circular" look to the playing field!
I haven't been commenting on the writing because I know this is based on a fanfic. I hope that's ok u.u I just don't want to give feedback and praise for something which may not be useful to you. I will say your adaptation of prose to dialogue is so far really good
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I love this comic. I love when characters are sadistically tortured!!
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I like that too, especially mental torture. Challenging one's very principles, shoving them into a situation where they have to do something they could never do. The pressure you can give to a brain is just so beautiful... The human mind is a piece of art, I like to explore it.
Not in real life of course! I'm not crazy(I think)!!!
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This is the best way to describe my craziness
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Well all artists are crasy, no one can escape that rule
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I do too. XD
I want my favorite characters to suffer, BUT there will be a happy (fluffy) ending. I love seeing both sides -- I'm quite an odd person...
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Yay me to sometimes!
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Cool, glad to know I'm not alone!
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I love people like you
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This comment concerns me.
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Well that got bad quick. Screw u Flowey. (how many times I've said this: 2)
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I am not sure i want to continue this story but i will try it anyway and if i see it's too hard for me, i will stop but for now i have one thing to say : the story is pretty cool and your style is awesome ^^ !
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Yeah, this story's not for everyone. Papyrus's situation only gets worse. Thank you for reading though, and for the complements
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Even if it's a hard story, it's a truly amazing one ^^ ! I think you deserve to be followed and appreciated by some people ^^
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I'm neither a masochist or a sadist, so why am I still here when I know how this goes?
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I would say because as humans we are a very curious species. We're always chasing the unknown searching for answers even if we're aware that we may not like the answers we get. Ignorance is bless isn't just an old saying y'know? Even Undertale the game uses that whole concept as a clever game mechanic.
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I'd agree with that, but I did read the fic.
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An excellent question. It's so weird how people enjoy the story even though it breaks their hearts; I'm trying to figure it out myself.
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Does this mean Flowey's been killing monsters, if he is this powerful?
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I suspect he's retained his EXP from other timelines; I think EXP and LV are just ways of representing a monster or human's intent to kill, and Flowey has no qualms about killing anyone at this point. If he intends to kill someone, it's gonna happen; he doesn't have a conscience or lack of experience which could hinder him.
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But Frisk doesn't retain her xp from other timelines.
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That's because Frisk is a human. That and he's not trapped in a soulless vessel where he's basically forced to live through multiple timelines.
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Your profile image is pretty humerus. Also, I think Flowey is okay. Not good, not bad. Just okay.
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