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Pap didn't know what he was getting into when this story began. Geez, Flowey is fun to draw, especially when he goes all horrific plant monster thing on Pap.

I guess there's one more page to this chapter. I'm slowly figuring out pacing... And then after that, I might make some cover art. ONWARD!!!

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The original story by UnrestedJade can be found here: archiveofourown.org/works/5056…
Btw if you want to make a comic dub of this, please go ahead! I totally encourage it. Just give credit to me and unrestedjade.

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Comments: 69

Ohana26 [2016-12-18 19:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Great but I can't read this. If I do I'll end up like how I was after listening to a reading of this story. So mad that my fists were shaking. I was mad at everyone in this fic. And I certainly don't want to relive that. No offense.

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fluffySlipper In reply to Ohana26 [2016-12-18 20:02:56 +0000 UTC]

No prob. It's understandable that some wouldn't want to read this; it's a huge departure from the tone of the original game. 

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BlazingCoral [2016-12-18 19:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, here we go.

The subtle shift in color from blues to reds REALLY sets the mood. There's an immediate sense of danger from the first panel onward. The expressions help too--I'm really feeling the mock-sympathy Flowey has in that fifth panel, as well as the fear and conflict from Papyrus over the prospect of fighting his friend. And that last panel does a great job of showing how enormous Flowey is compared to Papyrus.

Looking forward to seeing more of this!

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Cid-Zero [2016-12-18 11:35:49 +0000 UTC]

EXCITEMENT. 

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Indecissive [2016-12-18 11:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhhh snaaapp! O3o

Ill protect ye my lil cinnamon roll~ <3

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Art-in-heart4va [2016-12-18 11:12:30 +0000 UTC]

alright, where is the jumbo lawn mower?
i need it

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Leafybella In reply to Art-in-heart4va [2016-12-18 23:31:39 +0000 UTC]

Pfft. XD

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Arixese In reply to ??? [2016-12-18 06:38:59 +0000 UTC]

I hate that weed so much... Stay determined, Papy!

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Cornelischmidt1527 In reply to ??? [2016-12-18 06:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh...Papy's in trouble

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sonicfam123 [2016-12-18 01:21:08 +0000 UTC]

don't trust flower

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littleblueartist In reply to ??? [2016-12-18 00:42:10 +0000 UTC]

HOLY MOTHER OF MAYONNAISE!
THIS IS AMAZING

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Megan1289 In reply to ??? [2016-12-17 23:10:28 +0000 UTC]

This is getting really good!

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MinionLily [2016-12-17 21:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Poor Papyrus...

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Sprinkles257 [2016-12-17 21:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Random question, are you doing the whole story or just portions? I'm happy with either.
I love this so far! Oh god it's gonna get rough. XD

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fluffySlipper In reply to Sprinkles257 [2016-12-17 22:50:06 +0000 UTC]

I plan to do the whole story, though I'll probably have to cut out dialogue at some points. I'm excited for both the intense and the slow pages.

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Sprinkles257 In reply to fluffySlipper [2016-12-17 22:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, that must take so much dedication!
I look forward to seeing it. Good luck!

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kakashisgirlfighter [2016-12-17 21:06:32 +0000 UTC]

protect sweetheart skeleton!!!!

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KonataChanLoquendera [2016-12-17 21:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Jfc Papyrus!

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