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Published: 2016-12-12 20:57:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 29138; Favourites: 293; Downloads: 64
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Awww yeeaahhhh we're getting somewhere. Next is the end of the chapter. Poor Paps, Flowey's really making him uncomfortable... 
Btw, I'm thinking I'll be doing 1 page a week from here on out, releasing probably on Saturday.
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The original story by UnrestedJade can be found here: archiveofourown.org/works/5056…
Btw if you want to make a comic dub of this, please go ahead! I totally encourage it. Just give credit to me and unrestedjade.
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Oh don't make Papyrus uncomfortable Flowey that's not...golly oh mighty I'm starting to get bad feeling geez, this comic is turning out quite well this is quite remarkable art its great to see a prospective with Flowey & Papyrus interacting what an interesting take for this Undertale story comic I just love it.
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Second panel:
WHERE DID DEM LEAVES GO
Flowey: Who cares!
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You are so amazing at drawing the both of them!!!!
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"Getting murdered is no fun at all! Gosh!"
I'm dying.
Your Flowey expressions are again so on point ;w; Also I really like the tilt of papyrus' head in the last panel. Actually all your characters have a lot of solid structure to them that I admire quite a lot. My characters can sometimes fall a little too much into looking flat and stylized for the sake of an expression or something. Rather than actually having their heads and bodies feel like solid objects. So I really admire that! I might've mentioned that before. I'll try my best not to repeat myself ;w;
Also thank you for the nice replies! ;o; I promise I'll get to them soon if I have anything to respond with! (I probably do but if I don't then... I don't 
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Why do I see you on every single undertale comic I've ever read XDD Are you as obsessed with Undertale as I am???
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Flowey's sociopathic grin throughout the whole story, it's so unnerving... it fits perfectly.
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I like how this story is going. And the art work for it is steller
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Another great page! I seriously love how you draw Papyrus's expressions, and how clear the shape of his face is. I put a lot of detail in the values in my comic, but in your comic here you very easily convey the shape of his face with only the linework and one shade for the shadow. I need to learn how to do comics more simply like this--it's so effective!
What I really like here though is Flowey's expression in the seventh panel--he looks like he's genuinely curious, seriously contemplating the question. Which is appropriate, given what happens in the rest of the fic.
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It can only get better...yes...very...>:^)
Nice comic so far! I think it's really nice to see someone doing a comic of this story.
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This is such an interesting comic
I've always had a feeling that Papyrus is actually very very strong and maybe the reason he's always so gentle and merciful is because he hurt somebody in his past then vowed never to use his full strength ever again
He's quite a compassionate character and possibly when or if he hurt somebody it hurt him as well and he never wanted to feel that kind of pain anymore
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I also think Papyrus is super strong. There's definitely stuff in the game that hints at that. I like your theory that he did actually hurt someone in the past; that would explain why he's so reluctant to do so again, and it adds more to his backstory. Gosh, the skeletons are full of so many mysteries!
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Ikr?! They're so mysterious and I wish Fox added more depth to them in the game but it's up to us, the fans, to figure it out or make up our own things!
I think Undyne said something about Papyrus's strength too.
You could probably add that in this comic if you'd want! Like, Flowey is trying to convince Papyrus to fight but he just can't face being violent again and remembers his vow to kindness and gentleness or something like that
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this is so interesting, i LOVE this comic! ;v; (altho if sans comes in at any time... flowey you on for a bad time)
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you know this is based off a fan fiction, right?
but yeah, the artwork is really nice.
here's the actual fanfic: archiveofourown.org/works/5056…
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i didn't actually, so thank you! but hey, this artist art makes it way better tho ;v;
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it depends. sometimes, artwork is better because it can give you a more in-depth experience. and other times literature is better, since you can describe things in a way that artwork can't specifically :/
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;v;... i read it, and i'm enjoying the comic a bit more tbh... i'm just more of a comic person anyways XD
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I'm so glad you like my version 
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oh you did! ^w^ and i hope it stays that way, i love your art
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