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fluffySlipper — Flowey Is Not a Good Life Coach - Chap. 2, page 2
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Published: 2017-01-07 16:09:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 29943; Favourites: 279; Downloads: 51
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I'm starting to realize that it's important to not be perfectionist on these pages... I'm never fully satisfied with the result, but I can't spend forever working on a single page. This is a good challenge. Just gotta get more efficient, I suppose.
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The original story by UnrestedJade can be found here: archiveofourown.org/works/5056…
Btw if you want to make a comic dub of this, please go ahead! I totally encourage it. Just give credit to me and unrestedjade.
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Really flowey? You're so mean and ya boop him >:V
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will no one point out that papyrus is pleasuring flowey?
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HEY STOP RIGHT THERE!
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NEVER! *runs away with illegal fan fiction*
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hmmmm
how much does this healing do excactly. can it heal monsters who's souls are shattering or are fallen down? *thinks of sixbones*
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Flowey is basically saying 'we're gonna keep doing this whether you like it or not' i really freaking wish that was an option ;-;
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I really love this story and I'm so happy that somebody draws it! Furthermore, with lovely (ok, domes are really scary) drawings! ^^ I hope there will be next pages
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What? You are on Deviant Art too? Aaaah, yes, then I can leave proper comments!
Your comic is really amazing so far! True to the fic and your art looks stunning.
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Thank you very much! I'm glad we have collectively found a new conduit for communication
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First: I love this comic!
Second: I know that Papyrus probably is scared and other, but I think that he should practice with Flowey...I know, Flowey is a little...piece of....flower, but the new training can help Papyrus to be more stronger than now
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Before answer to you: have you already read the story? Because it will be sad if I spoiled you something ^^'
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For me, Papyrus is already stronger than Undyne ^^ He just doesn't want to hurt people. So Flowey is a great teacher, of course, but only to learn him how to LOVE 
But I totally agree with the first point!
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Gosh i don't know why but i feel like if it does turn this way which is Stockholm syndrome then yikes sans better whoop floweys a**!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Once again I continue to love how you draw expressions. I like that second panel a lot--Flowey has this amused expression, which looks kinda cute until you remember that oh yeah he's amused about how much he hurt Papyrus. He's still got a sense of childishness to him, which adds to how scary and dangerous he is.
(Also, gosh, I can't remember if I've said before, but I envy how well you can draw clothing folds. I still struggle with that.)
I like the way you draw the healing magic! Interesting how Flowey's isn't green, but then, he's not a normal kind of monster, so I could see him having a different color for his magic.
Gosh it's so distressing seeing Papyrus so quiet, but we know this is far from the worst that happens to him... brrr.
Don't worry about making the pages a bit faster. I've heard of other folks who do webcomics having to do the same thing, simplifying their style a bit more in order to be more efficient. I DEFINITELY know how it feels to start off way too big. <___> It's gonna take a while for me to finish even that 20-page comic I'm working on...
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I still struggle with clothing, and I always look up a quick reference if I can't figure out how the heck the cloth would look.
I thought Flowey's magic could be green or yellow, but I went with white because without a soul it wouldn't make sense for his magic to be colored.
I hope I don't have to simplify my art style. We'll see how this semester goes though. It's nice to have a consistent release schedule, but sometimes our expectations for ourselves get in the way.
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MAN I would not have guessed that you struggle with it. The folds you draw look so dang nice!
Aaah I hadn't thought of it that way! That makes sense.
I would totally understand if you weren't able to post pages on a consistent schedule. Coursework comes first! Good luck with your classes.
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Wow that is so good *-*
i read Flowey Is Not a Good Life Coach and, man, that was something alright. And i must say that this comic had been very loyal to it! i dare to say that your style fits perfectly with what i had imagined from the story! i love it! 
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Yes! Thank you very much; I put a lot of thought into how to best portray everything from the story.
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You don't need to make you art any more good. It's perfect the way it is.
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listen flowey, you better keep your filthy vines off my precious cinnamon roll papyrus otherwise your going to have a real BAD TIME. are we clear on that, bud?
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What's most impressive is the drawing. I mean, it's just perfect
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if you know what's good for you Paps.... you'll run... or at least tell Sans..
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This is perfectly unsettling. Flowey's expression and word choice really got me.
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Gee Flowey, you are going too hard on Papyrus...D:
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Don't worry, I don't think that anyone is ever really happy with his art ...
And I think your pictures look really good, even if you don't think so
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This was the very first fanfiction I've ever read and it was heart-wrenching! Your style really fits the atmosphere!
Are you planning on drawing the whole story?
I think, you don't need to worry about imperfections 
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I don't know why, but Flowey calling Pap "good boy" just creeps me the hell out XD
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