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fluffySlipper — Flowey Is Not a Good Life Coach - Chap. 1, page 3
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Published: 2016-12-03 15:53:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 33454; Favourites: 334; Downloads: 66
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Here's page 3! Don't mind slight art style changes--it'll probably be a while before I settle on something I like. But feel free to give me feedback if you have any recommendations. So Flowey's starting to lead the conversation to dark places... how wonderful! *insert somewhat related Undertale icon*
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The original story by UnrestedJade can be found here: archiveofourown.org/works/5056…
Also if you want to make a comic dub of this, please go ahead! I totally encourage it. Just give credit to me and UnrestedJade.
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i know this should be obvious, but it's kinda of scary to see how flowey is so unaffected by own death.
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i like how smiely flowey is when he is saying that he died
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Well that was sudden how you told Papyrus you where a boss monster to how ya became a flower Flowey good grief heh darn it that's the darkest way how you could put it but its true sadly 
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Just like so casual
“I died.”
And Papyrus is trying to think of something to say to that
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He's like "Wait what how can you be so casual about this-"
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flowey is literly so positive about something so bad
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I love how Flowey is so nonchalant about this. This is why i love him XD
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"I died!"
Me:Well you certainly dropped a bomb there
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flowey: they beat me to death *grins* lol
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Flowey just so cheerful about the fact that he was beat to death.
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When I saw Papyrus' face in the 5th panel...
I died.
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(somehow my tab got unpinned?)
Flowey's face in the "I died!" panel kills me! Such nice perspective on his face while still giving it dimension without making it looks flat! DX so nice! I love it!
I also really like his expression in the last panel. It's the kind of expression I like a lot and I think one I've attempted myself (with questionable success X'D)
My favourite though just in general is Papyrus' " 8D ...." response. Possibly the best way to respond to any of this tbh X'DD
I also like that you alternate between giving Flowey leaves and not giving him leaves. I don't know if that is just a style adjustment or if you change it up. If it's just a style change that's cool 
Flowey is that one guy no-one wants to talk to because they always say super creepy things and you can't figure out if it's unintentional and they just don't realise how messed up it is or if they're trolling you.
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If I could reset too I'd probably play with everyones emotions like that...
...oh well sorry but I think its true.
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....uh huh.
probably shouldn't say that too loud there buddy.
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ONLY IF I COULD RESET LIKE FLOWEY
And I wouldn't kill anyone, only play and experiment, try to know their personalities better without actually hurting them in the end. That would be interesting, even to make friends
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hmmm~ I suppose I can understand that. It's dishonest but nor malicious
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Is it dishonest to want to know people better so I wont have them offended in the end?
(I also would reset to remake a school test tough)
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Kinda 
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Ooooh
Yeah makes sense
But I would still do it and bc it would be SO FUN
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Even if someone didn't know you and your comics, they could tell you're a comic artist just by the way you write. It's so refreshing and insightful, I love it ^^
I'm so glad you like that last panel, I tried hard to make it convey just the right emotion. Over the past few months I've learned a lot about the billion different smiles one can draw, and it really is the little things that impact them the most. I think what made this one work was the way the teeth are widened at the top almost in a grimace, and the eyelids are angled in more of a ^ shape then a v . It's definitely one of my favorite expressions too
Ah tbh in regards to the leaves I forgot about them in some panels. I think I phased them out after this as an official style change, to be more like the in-game design. They did make for good poses though. I like your explanation better though (Flowey does what he wants) XD
And your last point is so spot on (❁▽❁)
(also so sorry for the late response )
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I like creepy stuff
Also, you should check your closet tonight
You might find me there.
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I just found this comic and it looks nice!
I laughed pretty hard on this page... lol
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"They beat me to death!" Even though Flowey's gone insane at this point, I like how you can see the pain in that expression.
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The expressions on their faces are amazing. Fantastic work, I'm reading this again and again.
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