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Sprybug — Tooth and Claw - Iss 1 - Pg 4
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Tooth and ClawIssue 1
Page 4
"Things that go bump..."
Originally, this page only had 4 panels and then I thought it over and brought over some of page 5 to help speed it along. It took me a few hours to rearrange and fix things but it worked out pretty well.
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Trouble's a'brewin', matey! Stand guard with ye lives! DON'T HOLD BACK, AND GIVE'EM HELL, KID!
Unless they've got laser beams comin' outta their eyes, then we're all doomed to high heaven. 8U
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Lessee....Fierce mink warrior with a sword vs. Wealthy muskrat villager with a pitchfork.
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WHERE?! Oh fuck...*Mink takes off*
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You should do a Redwall crossover at some point. xD
Make it all bloody, have virtually almost all characters die in the end, just like in the books.
Milo comes on top of a 40-man battle royale and proclaims himself as King of all Rodents. xD
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lol. Well, there will be a big battle scene that involves the village, however Milo will be absent because Copper tells him to stay away. But that doesn't mean that Milo won't have his moment.
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Hahahah, awesome. x3 I can't wait, man. :3 You have a way with designing such a very involving world.
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When I start creating a new world with characters that involves a story, I try to think of everything and at times it consumes my thoughts. I think about this at least once a day and how it plays out. It also helps me solidify everything and gives less of a chance for plotholes and a well thought out storyline.
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Same goes with me. :3 Although now I wish I had handled these issues better for some reason. xD
If DC lets me do'em over, I'd love to. New tech, new script, and better organization. All I've gotis a Wordpad with every key event in heavy detail and where what extra issues go where to fill in some gaps.
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I need to be better at that myself. I keep everything in my head instead of writing it out.
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Yeah. D:
Losing them or changing ideas can be a pain. Now and then I get a bad OCD fit and baleet important stuff when I shouldn't.
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This is why I always sleep with a nightlight!
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Lol , in the last panel he's like "oh shi-!" XD.
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Nah, it's all the build-up and anticipation. He sees his target right there in the shadow and his primal instincts are kicking in to gear. Food!
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Wait...they actually dine ON muskrats?
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Yeah, minks are carnivores. Muskrats are their favorite dish. That's how it is in nature.
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*a young mouse in a short fiery-orange tunic swings in on a rope, attached by a marlinspike to the ceiling - as he lands, he pulls the rope-dart loose and catches it, deftly winding it over his shoulders and sheathing the spike at his side*
Darien the Dart: Did somebody mention action?
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You and your adding silliness to a serious and tense situation.
I will say, that's one thing that drove me nuts about Brian Jacques writing style.
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Darien: Oh, come on! I have a sense of humour, but I really enjoy a good fight!
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Mink: Then I hope you enjoy being my dinner!
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Darien: I don't think so... 
(As the son of Mariel and Dandin (fan-couple), he is a formidable warrior)
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Aww, c'mon the mink just wants to eat you.
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I'm afraid Darien isn't the sort to let some generic bad guy get the better of him.
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Maybe so, but sometimes you can't control that. All it takes is a slip-up, a stroke of bad luck, a good attack by a foe, or perhaps a friend of theirs from behind.
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Well, I am his author. I won't let him be killed off, that's for sure.
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Alright, but no god modes, miracles, and untouchability.....aaaaaaannnnnnnd...FIGHT!
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*Darien swings high and fast*
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